Sunday 29 September 2013

crooked

     Innocent face
 Crooked intentions
A wolf in saffron garb.



     Under the scalpel
  to fix crooked nose
bolster her filmi career.



Crooked line
rising on graph
dwindling fortunes

For : Haiku Heights

24 comments:

  1. Great Haiku on culmination of the month....well done Kalpana.. and thanks for your constant presence on my blog too.....God bless!!!

    RS

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    1. Thanks for the blessing Rs-ji. Nice way to start the week.

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  2. I like the last one - it all depends on the axes...

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  3. Your second haiku was my first thought on seeing the pormpt..
    But I didnt know how to transform it into a haiku..
    You did it well!

    And I loved all of them!!! :)

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  4. Thats such a realisitc haiku career behind the glitz and glamour of a celeb !
    Thanks for visiting my blog with out fail !
    I respect u for that .. I will take time and read ur blog but pls excuse me if it gets delayed :)

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  5. Beautiful. Thank you for a month of good poems.

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  6. Awesome threesome.The third one is very realistic!

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  7. Wow! Nice ones all of them, Kalpana. I like the diversity of subjects you've chosen.

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  8. Nice set, Kalpana...the first one is super-duper !! Let's send it to Asharam Papu's AShram! LOL...

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  9. Loved all your 3 different takes on the prompt! Good ones!

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  10. Nice set, Kapana. A beautiful ending to a fantastic month.

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  11. Three great Haiku. My favourite was the first one and especially that last line, 'a wolf in saffron garb' - great image.

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  12. great set.........the second one made me smile.........

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  13. I liked all.You have a nice way of penning your lines

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  14. Wonderful haiku. Such diverse thoughts for a single topic - quite cool :) I can see that you have fallen in love with Haiku :)

    -Vaisakh

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  15. Those are some diverse subjects you chose. And all are great as always...Crooked :)

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  16. Loved all, great representation of crooked in all of them ♥

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  17. Couldn't help thinking of Sridevi with the second one! :D

    Lovely haikus, Kalpana!

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    1. Vidyaji all the heroines (heroes ???) fall under this category. Sridevi Rekha , Prinkya etc.

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