tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post6606164854984920910..comments2024-02-08T00:39:50.645-08:00Comments on Gemini in the sky: The lost illusionkalpana solsihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05459797629127380780noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-30536497275231205702013-11-16T02:25:06.620-08:002013-11-16T02:25:06.620-08:00How beautifully you showed the past to be an illus...How beautifully you showed the past to be an illusion. It clearly is a thing which misses many...<br /><br /><a href="http://subzeroricha.blogspot.in/" rel="nofollow"> Richa</a>Richa Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18147592329627851095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-91084402718890104622013-11-16T01:53:21.045-08:002013-11-16T01:53:21.045-08:00Lovely images and like a stream it just flows beau...Lovely images and like a stream it just flows beautifullyalan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-42894267208011642152013-11-16T00:40:20.607-08:002013-11-16T00:40:20.607-08:00I love your imagery. Nice flow of the poem.. Thank...I love your imagery. Nice flow of the poem.. Thank you Bijaylaxmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947601220851971664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-17219111418358664532013-11-15T21:25:05.373-08:002013-11-15T21:25:05.373-08:00beautiful..beautiful..Rathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14621417958017949084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-21171718615666475592013-11-15T21:15:02.943-08:002013-11-15T21:15:02.943-08:00loved how you conveyed illusion hereloved how you conveyed illusion hereLady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-13735320039469038112013-11-15T20:45:22.256-08:002013-11-15T20:45:22.256-08:00Wish we could knead our lives the way we want...Wish we could knead our lives the way we want...Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-89807459891328233042013-11-15T19:58:01.539-08:002013-11-15T19:58:01.539-08:00Superb.Superb.Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325697671806865458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-52906985603720393202013-11-15T08:58:54.790-08:002013-11-15T08:58:54.790-08:00Beautiful Kalpana :) loved the imagery!!Beautiful Kalpana :) loved the imagery!!Aditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881690136782545422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-52961545741092796662013-11-15T06:27:59.436-08:002013-11-15T06:27:59.436-08:00Your imagery very much resonate with me...dream bi...Your imagery very much resonate with me...dream big! ~ nice poetic flow ~humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-29195973015713590202013-11-15T06:06:57.701-08:002013-11-15T06:06:57.701-08:00Now that's something that's high on messag...Now that's something that's high on message... Loved the imagery your words created for me!Shilpa Garghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11016927627801620377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-59300667569992393732013-11-15T05:26:59.216-08:002013-11-15T05:26:59.216-08:00Those are lines that are beautiful and deep. Loved...Those are lines that are beautiful and deep. Loved it. Rekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13233279907027595531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-39604143724952784522013-11-15T04:22:29.173-08:002013-11-15T04:22:29.173-08:00beautiful my dear. My fav lines - soaked into the ...beautiful my dear. My fav lines - soaked into the fragrance of love<br />the aroma kissed my each curvesugandhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09574479583150783637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-17130630804027345152013-11-15T02:34:23.573-08:002013-11-15T02:34:23.573-08:00Such beautiful lines with a lot of depth. Loved th...Such beautiful lines with a lot of depth. Loved the image. It goes well with the lines. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-3530007352808638632013-11-14T23:51:51.416-08:002013-11-14T23:51:51.416-08:00Thanks you so much.Thanks you so much.kalpana solsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05459797629127380780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-35318816578224370512013-11-14T17:18:45.306-08:002013-11-14T17:18:45.306-08:00The line "I wove my dream on a running stream...The line "I wove my dream on a running stream" added so much to your lovely poem. Nicely presented with the photograph, too --- a fine response to the prompt!Mary Ann Potterhttp://www.fromthestarcatcher.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-73652438417707519522013-11-14T12:37:25.951-08:002013-11-14T12:37:25.951-08:00When it feels that life crumbles like a sand castl...When it feels that life crumbles like a sand castle it is probably a sign that it is time to tear away from one's past. I too enjoyed the imagery.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-63544935976550144072013-11-14T12:21:07.897-08:002013-11-14T12:21:07.897-08:00I really like the imagery and the metaphor you use...I really like the imagery and the metaphor you use here. Excellent. Thanks for posting and I like the photo too.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-20595420400754580882013-11-14T11:34:04.478-08:002013-11-14T11:34:04.478-08:00Love the quietness at the beach during the off sea...Love the quietness at the beach during the off season and watching the "the surface of waves ,dancing"Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-30894449223563833412013-11-14T11:28:06.520-08:002013-11-14T11:28:06.520-08:00It is sometimes hard to leave one's past, but ...It is sometimes hard to leave one's past, but often necessary to do so!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-59536405734692983882013-11-14T08:01:25.721-08:002013-11-14T08:01:25.721-08:00I love the imagery and the message. Our dreams an...I love the imagery and the message. Our dreams and hopes in life are much like sand castles so easily dashed and lost. We just don't know what is going to happen next in life. That is why I take it as it comes and never plan anything. ♥Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-87349551566835061422013-11-14T05:19:37.025-08:002013-11-14T05:19:37.025-08:00There is a subtle message in this beautiful poem d...There is a subtle message in this beautiful poem describing of how sand castles painfully built get washed away by relentless sea waves and how in our life all the dreams and plans can go awry by unknown circumstancesKParthasarathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02189924874350906456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1367224821422137378.post-32095570346985773892013-11-14T03:53:23.357-08:002013-11-14T03:53:23.357-08:00Lovely imagery!:)Lovely imagery!:)Tarang Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.com