From the deepest oceans,
the twenty and six pearls,
stared at me, smilingly.
various combinations and permutations,
I string each word ,
to form sentences.
Words and sentences fuse together
to complete a story.
of a beautiful adornment.
A beautiful adornment
Completes a story.
words and sentences fuse together
to form sentences.
I string each word
into various combinations , permutations.
stared at me, smilingly,
the twenty and six pearls,
from the deepest oceans.
This is a palindrome poem. The last line of the first verse is the first line of the second verse. and the first line of the first verse is the last line of the second verse. I have made subtle changes to the second verse.
For : PoetryJam
Wow... you did great with the prompt. I really like the idea of the alphabet letters as pearls in the ocean.
ReplyDeleteThank you Laurie for your appreciation.
Deletenice....the creation story in letters and words....and when we write, the BIG BANG...smiles...nice job on the mirror effect....
ReplyDeleteThis is very well written indeed. I really liked how you used the 'twenty and six pearls.'
ReplyDeleteI like your extended metaphor and the idea of stringing letters.
ReplyDeleteVery cool imagery and a type of poetry I had never encountered before. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteExcellent, letters and words that form so much and create, this was very well done.
ReplyDeleteYes, beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful! I love the images of words as pearls from the ocean :-)
ReplyDeleteA very beautifully woven a pearl necklace. Wonderful!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem and a wonderful concept this palindrome is.:)
ReplyDeleteThis is ridiculously amazing!! Awesome..
ReplyDeleteWow! It made such an interesting read Kalpana :)
ReplyDeleteRicha
Wow !!! Superb one, there !! Really nice Kalpana ji :)
ReplyDeleteReally amazing read Kalpana..
ReplyDeleteWow! How cool is this?? Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I didn't know about this kind of poetry. Impressed!
ReplyDeleteMy love for Maths made me smile at the permutations and combinations. And I love how you describe the letters as pearls. And how cool is the backwards prompt. I enjoyed it too.
ReplyDeletewell written and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThat is super kalpana...first time hearing of such a poem...:)
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