Saturday 7 September 2013

Nipped Dreams

This weekend we're asking for 30 of your own words plus the three following words for a total of 33 words.  
Tether Loft Crown


Sprinting for fitness, her body was crushed badly between the wall and the

 heavy vehicle and her life was tether-ing on the brink, her loft-ty dreams of 

 the beauty pageant crown faded away. 

for : Trifecta Writing Challenge
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22 comments:

  1. Afshan Shaik7 September 2013 at 10:13

    A story in 30 words! now thats something I can never do :)
    Good one kalpana

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    1. kalpana solsi8 September 2013 at 08:47

      Afshan , When I started to blog , I used to read others works and learn and was astonished to see some works written in 100 , 55 and 33 words. I started with 100 words and have now graduated to 33 words. Thanks for the appreciation.

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  2. Whispering Thoughts7 September 2013 at 10:14

    poor girl

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    1. kalpana solsi8 September 2013 at 08:45

      Yes Ruby I too felt bad for her and her incomplete dreams.

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  3. Draug7 September 2013 at 16:34

    It's always sad when dreams are cut short.

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    1. kalpana solsi8 September 2013 at 08:44

      Yes very sad when budding dreams are nipped in the bud but its a sad fact .

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  4. JannaTWrites7 September 2013 at 23:24

    When I saw "loft", I couldn't get "lofty" out of my head. I like how you pulled it off here!

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    1. kalpana solsi8 September 2013 at 08:43

      Thank you JannaTWrites. In this short story of mine the word 'loft' could be used effectively , so I had to tweak it a bit.

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  5. Shilpa Garg8 September 2013 at 00:40

    Ah! That's sad but wonderfully captured in 30 words! Good one :)

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  6. Kajal Kapur8 September 2013 at 09:17

    What a brilliant attempt Kalpana. I tink I can never attempt a story in 30 words. Kudos, girl!

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  7. Privy Trifles8 September 2013 at 10:04

    Beautifully expressed for 30 words!!

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  8. brudberg8 September 2013 at 11:00

    Sad and poignant

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  9. Atreyee8 September 2013 at 11:27

    What a tragic end to a young life and beautiful dreams!Well done Kalpana:-)

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  10. Sini Rachel8 September 2013 at 12:38

    Tragic !!

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  11. TMWHickman8 September 2013 at 16:02

    Wow--a sad story!

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  12. Trifecta8 September 2013 at 21:00

    Thanks for linking up! Be sure to come back and vote!

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  13. Anonymous9 September 2013 at 04:11

    Wonderfully written...:)

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  14. Anonymous9 September 2013 at 20:31

    Oh wow! This is amazing. I mean the idea.

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  15. Anonymous10 September 2013 at 00:29

    That's so tragic. Well captured in 30 words.

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  16. preethi10 September 2013 at 07:39

    That is one tough challenge :) well written :)

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  17. Pixie13 September 2013 at 09:32

    oh! how sad... tragic that her dreams were crushed so terribly!
    Beautifully expressed in just 30 words Kalpana!

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