Saturday, 29 June 2013

FIRE-FLY TRILOGY.




HAIKU HEIGHTS BADGE

Haiku Heights Badge
Three Lines From Your Heart, A Haiku Art

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                     Candle-light
       fire-fly hovers
           R.I.P.
                         






           dark forest.
Lovers fleeing from parents
     Fireflies lead way.


 
       

           Dark night
        twinkling stars
  or fire-flies in the sky.






Twinkling fire-flies in the sky.



                                                FOR :- HAIKU HEIGHTS # 260 - FIREFLY
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  1. Anonymous29 June 2013 at 02:44

    Lovely set =)

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    1. kalpana solsi29 June 2013 at 03:28

      Thanks for the appreciation, mindlovemisery.

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  2. Nanka29 June 2013 at 03:56

    Lovely luminescence!!

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  3. rallentanda29 June 2013 at 04:25

    I like the fireflies leading the eloping lovers...very imaginative!

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    1. kalpana solsi29 June 2013 at 04:27

      Thank you for the appreciation, rallentanda.

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  4. Reshma29 June 2013 at 08:12

    The glow of the Haiku is beautiful Kalpana, nature's portable lights light up our way at night...

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    1. kalpana solsi29 June 2013 at 08:55

      Thank you Reshma. You have described them as Nature's portable lights- Superb imagination.

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  5. Susie Clevenger29 June 2013 at 12:59

    Beautiful set of haiku...love the fireflies leading the way for escaping lovers

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    1. kalpana solsi29 June 2013 at 20:39

      The fireflies act as a guide in the darkness. Thank Susie.

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  6. Anonymous30 June 2013 at 01:17

    I like the dark forest one best, but they all tell stories.

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  7. Mary30 June 2013 at 04:22

    I really love when I see fireflies! They remind me that there are miracles in nature! Nice share. Thanks for taking part in Poets United Poetry Pantry.

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    1. kalpana solsi30 June 2013 at 04:48

      Mary, its my pleasure to take part in Poets United Poetry Pantry.Fireflies are one of Nature's miracles.

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  8. darkfoam30 June 2013 at 04:22

    Aww.. On the 1st one, but your rip cracked me up. Our skies have been alight with fireflies lately. It's seems appropriate that they would light the way for eloping lovers.

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    1. kalpana solsi30 June 2013 at 04:49

      I agree with you, foam that the fireflies are better off with the eloping lovers.Thanks for reading.

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  9. Sherri B.30 June 2013 at 05:59

    Magical words! Fireflies are wonderful and I'm always thrilled when I see them each summer.

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    1. kalpana solsi30 June 2013 at 07:19

      Thank you Sherri B. Fire-flies are nice to watch.

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  10. TALON30 June 2013 at 06:46

    These were all so lovely. Fireflies are so magical to me. I get so excited when I see them in the garden - like I'm ten again and have a jar to catch them. (We would release them, but they never failed to fascinate us).

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  11. Kalpana30 June 2013 at 09:00

    Beautifully written. The first made me sad but then the third was full of excitement and romance. Nice

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  12. Sherry Blue Sky30 June 2013 at 11:18

    Beautiful!!!

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  13. Unknown1 July 2013 at 00:03

    Lovers lead by fireflies is such a beautiful way of using the prompt and powerful imagery! Love your haiku!

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  14. Anand S Unni1 July 2013 at 00:52

    Fireflies makes your heart light, I believe. I remember this one night when I was in a hill-station at Kerala for my vacation last year, we lived in a govt quarters and naturally there was no power supply at night. Feeling dejected. We, my mom and I, went out in a hope to find the moon. What awaited us outside was a view that I would remember at my deathbed. The whole place was filled with fireflies. Everywhere we looked, there were fireflies. Thousands of them. It seemed the whole place was glowing. You could use all words of beauty and still feel you didn't describe it well. It was the most beautiful thing I ever saw, and ever will see. :)

    Oh and I almost forgot, the poem is subliminal. Loved it. And thanks for making my day with your poem. :)

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    1. kalpana solsi1 July 2013 at 01:11

      Anand S. thank you for sharing a lovely experience that you had in Kerala, God's own country. And once again thanks for appreciating my Haiku.

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  15. Unknown1 July 2013 at 05:51

    Beautiful writing Kalpana...almost magical. :)

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    1. kalpana solsi1 July 2013 at 06:01

      Himani, thanks for the magical appreciation. :)

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  16. hyperCRYPTICal3 July 2013 at 00:51

    Lovely - the first made me smile!
    Anna :o]

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