PHOTO PROMPT © Susan Eames
His cell phone would ring and he would hold it tighter to
clamber onto to a coconut tree.
This ritual was sacrosanct and quotidian affair. She tried her best to hear the one side of
the conversation.
However, the height and his low tone would not reveal anything.
Suzy had heard that he was engaged to a beautiful girl prior
to their 10-month-old
marriage.
People whispered that Suzy possessed strange powers.
She glared at the sagging branch of the tree. Thud. His
spine cracked under the weight of
the tree.
The day after, Suzy answered the call and smiled.
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ReplyDeleteHe shouldn't have messed with Suzy! Nice one.
ReplyDeleteHe messed with her as he didnt know her well. Thanks Keith.
DeleteI think the climbing the coconut tree was a bit of a give-away
ReplyDeleteHe felt she could not hear but his actions were suspicious. thanks Neil M.
DeleteI'm thinking Suzy did have strange powers. It seems she got revenge. Good story, Kalpana. Well written. ---- Suzanne
ReplyDeleteThanks Suzanne. Suzy did possess strange powers.
DeleteDear Kalpana,
ReplyDeleteAnd the moral to the tale is never make Suzy angry. You wouldn't like her when she's angry.
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Surprise ending.
ReplyDeleteSuzy magic turned tragic.
I'll never understand- Why do men (or women) cheat?
Suzy takes no prisoners, not even a warning for the guy! Nice take.
ReplyDeleteThere is no fury as a woman scorned and Suzy is. thanks Iain K.
DeleteOh dear, scary Suzy!
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DeleteI wonder why he fell for Suzy coming out of the engagement...strange power at work.
ReplyDeleteMaybe a misunderstanding or something. one never knows. thanks sumandebray
DeleteWell, she certainly didn't give him a chance to redeem himself. Cold-blooded sort, I feel for any man who takes up with her.
ReplyDeleteMaybe suzy must have questioned him and reached a dead-end. Thanks Linda.
DeleteDid Suzy not know he had been previously engaged? Suzy should have checked first and made sure he truly was free.
ReplyDeleteSuzy is crazy!
He was engaged and the wedding called off. Thanks Dale.
DeleteOhhhh, great suspense. Well done!!!
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DeleteThis one made me chuckle.
ReplyDeleteAm glad to hear it. Thanks Neel A.
DeleteDon't mess with Suzie, apparently a divorce wasn't good enough for her. Very imaginative, i love it.
ReplyDeleteHe had it coming. I'd like to listen to what Suzy and the caller would chat about.
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