Tuesday, 17 September 2013

Chirping



connection made
with her late husband
Feeding the birds
In concrete jungle
traffic zooms
No chirping sparrows

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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 September 2013 at 02:52

    Wow - each of these is a gem!

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  2. Magical Mystical Teacher18 September 2013 at 06:35

    I like the first one especially. I find myself doing things that my deceased parents did, and when I do, I feel connected to them.

    Three Crickets Chirping

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  3. Anonymous18 September 2013 at 06:41

    I especially like the first one...

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  4. Reading Pleasure18 September 2013 at 07:00

    Great take! The first one is moving!

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  5. Panchali18 September 2013 at 08:14

    Beautiful set, Kalapana. Ah, the re connection, I'm sure, would lift many spirits...:)

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  6. Sumana Roy18 September 2013 at 09:08


    heartfelt words describe that sense of loss in both haiku......great creation..

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  7. Amrit Sinha18 September 2013 at 21:51

    The first one touched my soul. Very beautiful haiku.

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  8. Saru Singhal19 September 2013 at 08:36

    I connect with the first haiku, when i was a kid my mother used to read this story where the princess came back as a sparrow.

    Feel sorry for the concrete jungle and absence of beautiful birds in there.

    Beautiful haiku.

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  9. Sridevi Nayak K19 September 2013 at 17:17

    sparrows have declined so much, its difficult to ponder in one's thoughts because of sudden and massive globalization

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