Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge Month #XXIV, Sun's ''gathering seashells''
gathering seashells
while ocean tide rise and falls
two sisters bicker
while ocean tide rise and falls
two sisters bicker
My take
gathering seashells
while ocean tide rise and falls
two sisters bicker
that they should not part
the shore and the waves.
( the shore and the waves are the two sisters. The waves lash the shore intermittently and during low tide recede . so the sister want to stay together )
FOR : CARPE DIEM
Parting could be such sweet sorrow!
ReplyDeleteDeep Waters Recede
I like this continuation a lot ... that deeper layer does it.
ReplyDeleteI first read it as the siblings bickering over whether the waves and shore should part....I like your way better,,,,
ReplyDeleteThe thought the the shore is in love with the waves is a beautiful one.
ReplyDeleteIt's exactly the sound of waves hitting the shore I love the bickering idea.
ReplyDeleteLove your continuation. The sand and the waves are eternally linked. ♥
ReplyDeleteThat was really beautiful Kalpana Ma'am! Sisters forever. :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery... And the duo is inseperable...
ReplyDeleteRicha
Lovely thought behind the imagery. :)
ReplyDeleteShore and wave! Perfect lovers! Beautiful imagination.
ReplyDeletevery nice completion - one can take and ponder further to find deeper meaning. lovely. ☺
ReplyDeleteOh this is such a beauty Kalpana:-)And I just realized that my completion has similar strains:-)
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