Monday, 10 June 2019

Property






                                                                 PHOTO PROMPT © Ceayr

“Sir, this beautiful property is owned ….

“….by a landlady who suffers from OCD. Blue being her most loved color she wears her 

heart on her sleeve and prefers to keep pesky intruders at bay.”

“But Sir, how do….”

“She is in the blooming range of 25-35 years and prefers to charge the rent as per the 

tenant’s tastes and intellectual standard. She is a stickler for punctuality and hates to be 

kept waiting.”

The estate agent’s pupils bulge with a farrago of admiration and curiosity.

“Tricks of the trade”. The detective winks climbing the stairs while the agent scampers.


                            Written for : Friday Fictioneers . Thanks Rochelle


                                    

Word Count  : 100

13 comments:

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  2. Dear Kalpana,

    If there were more detectives like this one there would be fewer cold cases.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Oh, what happens next???
    Loved this bungalow!!

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    1. the detective rents the beautiful bungalow. thanks Shilpa.

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  4. Well, this could certainly be the prelude to a great detective story! Very well done :_)

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  5. And love blossoms between the detective and the landlady, sequel?

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  6. Good story well written, Kalpana. This detective must be a descendent of Sherlock Holmes. :D --- Suzanne

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  7. Looks like a happy ending :)
    Detective has to follow her rules though!

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  8. Anything to keep those estate agents away! :-)

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  9. That detective sure knows how to detect. Fun story.

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