The short athlete
Sprints down the track
to pole-vault
over the bar.
Lands down in rhythmic motion
to a standing ovation
of the packed stadium.
The athlete refers to the short life of a human on this planet. The track is symbolic of the path assigned to him. The athlete has to jump high over the bar, overcoming the negative human emotions of anger, jealousy, anger , hate and fragile ego. On conquering these long demons of evils, man is at peace and hence the thunderous applause.
The long and short of it.
DEVOTING THIS TO:- VERSE FIRST~ THE LONG AND SHORT OF IT
Fabulous piece!
ReplyDeleteThank you Karla B.
DeleteWouldn't it be nice to have that standing ovation at the end of each day!
ReplyDeleteA good idea. We should have the applause at the end of each day. Thank you Robyn Greenhouse.
DeletePole vaulting does not look easy...and life sometimes isn't either...the symbolism works.
ReplyDeleteLife isn't easy not does it look so. If the athlete manages to clear the bar he is termed successful but if he fails he tires another two attempts. Life too is the same way.Thank you for reading,commenting and appreciating.
DeleteNicely realised, both literally and symbolically.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary. When I used the pole-vault symbol for life and its trials, I was skeptical about reader's response. Bit am happy to receive only appreciation.
DeleteThank you Loredana.My pleasure.
ReplyDeletethe imagery of life and the pole vault is excellent. As each of cross a bar of a success we can applaud ourselves and hope that others might also applaud.
ReplyDeleteexcellent post.
Old Grizz
You have interpreted my poem correctly. Thanx gsb.
ReplyDelete:) A few words saying everything...
ReplyDeleteThank you Vandana :)
DeleteEveryone needs praise and it always helps to celebrate with each other
ReplyDeleteThere is no being on earth who doesnt' love praise. Thank you alan1704.
DeleteBeautifully written. Glad you penned your thoughts behind the poem. I loved the symbolism.
ReplyDeleteThank you Suzy. I am happy that you liked it. My pleasure.
DeleteLife is definitely full of short sprints that we must overcome throughout the years of our life. It would be really nice to have someone show appreciation for what we have done each day. I guess the best thing we can do for ourselves is to show appreciation by having a big bowl of ice cream.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this with us for this weeks Theme Thursday. Have a great week.
God bless.
WOW! A big bowl of ice-cream is a nice way of patting our own back. I love ice-creams. Thank you Mrsupole for appreciating.
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