Friday, 21 June 2013

LUNCH







The fat hen moved
 deposits an egg.
    It's my lunch.





She feeds the starving
from her fertile womb
     Mother Earth.






Opened lunch box of her heart
            aroma wafted
      Satiated my hungry soul.








                                            FOR : HAIKU HEIGHT # 258 LUNCH

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21 comments:

  1. Reading Pleasure21 June 2013 at 12:18

    Wow! Beautiful and unique takes on the prompt. The last one is so super

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  2. Panchali21 June 2013 at 12:30

    Take a bow.....Great take on the prompt. Feel satiated after reading your Haiku.

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    1. kalpana solsi21 June 2013 at 12:42

      OH Panchali!! I am honoured by your appreciation. Thank you.

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  3. Maggie Grace21 June 2013 at 14:05

    Adore the Mother Earth one. Beautiful!

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    1. kalpana solsi21 June 2013 at 19:12

      Mother Earth is very beautiful. Thank you Maggie.

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  4. WabiSabi21 June 2013 at 17:07

    If only we could feed all of the hungry of the world! Lunch

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    1. kalpana solsi21 June 2013 at 19:14

      Wish we could feed all the hungry in this world.Some parts of the world have abundance while some other parts are famished. Thank you WabiSabi.

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  5. Unknown22 June 2013 at 00:37

    Wow Kalpana. Second one is beautiful!!!

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    1. kalpana solsi22 June 2013 at 00:50

      Thank you Juzta mum. Your appreciation is my pleasure.

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  6. J Cosmo Newbery22 June 2013 at 01:49

    They are all good - like teh first one best.

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  7. J Cosmo Newbery22 June 2013 at 01:50

    Why do you have verification AND moderation?

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  8. Unknown22 June 2013 at 05:52

    Wonderful Haiku. I loved the first one. The fat hen getting ready to lay an egg for your lunch!! Kya sundar idea hai.

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    1. kalpana solsi22 June 2013 at 07:31

      Thank you for reading Usha Menon.The poultry industry is a boon to us.

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  9. darkfoam22 June 2013 at 09:18

    Oh, these are all so apt! I don't think I can pick a favorite.. :-)

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    1. kalpana solsi22 June 2013 at 09:54

      Thank you foam for reading. At times it is difficult to pick and choose a favourite.

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  10. Tarang Sinha22 June 2013 at 09:56

    Interesting take on the prompt!! You made a nice set:)

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  11. Nanka22 June 2013 at 10:39

    Very uniquely different!!

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