Friday 12 July 2013

SWING

Goggle Image.


Opportunity  knocks
doors swing open 
fortunes increase.



Goggle Image.
               
            


    

 Girl on swing
   to and fro
lost childhood.



mood swings                                   
hormone imbalance
pills pop   

FOR : HAIKU HEIGHTS # 264 SWING
                                                         

24 comments:

  1. I love when opportunity's doors swing open.

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    1. Lolly,everybody loves when fortunes increase. thank you for reading

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  2. Loved the positivity in the first Haiku Kalpana :) unfortunately the second and third Haiku are a sad reflection of the current times.

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    1. the second and the third ones are a sad reflection but the harsh truth. but the first one uplifts our mood , isn't it Reshma.

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  3. I found all these pretty reflective.. well done..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/ah-swinging-childhoodhaiku.html

    RS

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  4. Opportunity knocks I like that and the look of the doors

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  5. How soon time flies as you watch one swing to and fro!! They have become adults now!!

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    1. time flies very fast. I still feel that I have had not enough of swinging in my childhood.




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  6. I love opportunity popping up but enjoyed all 3 takes.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  7. Nice take on "swing" and great image. If I may suggest, the haiku form is closer if you have door swings open/opportunity knocks/fortunes increase. 4-6-4 :)

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    1. WOW! that's great.Will try to be careful next time. Thanks Maggie.

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  8. I like pills pop instead of the more used phrase pops pills...novel idea!

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  9. Fantastic haiku! I like the balance of energies

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  10. A well thought out collection of swings!

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  11. I especially like the second one. Nicely done.

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  12. I can relate to all of them...great haiku collection!

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  13. Lovely set...and the last one was my favorite...unique take!

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  14. Love the first one (the most). Deep one, Kalpana. Well done!

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  15. Kalpana... nice take... loved the third haiku....

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