Friday, 12 July 2013

SWING

Goggle Image.


 Opportunity  knocks
doors swing open 
fortunes increase.
Goggle Image.
               
            
    

  Girl on swing
   to and fro
lost childhood.

mood swings                                   
hormone imbalance
pills pop   
FOR : HAIKU HEIGHTS # 264 SWING
                                                         

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  1. Lolly12 July 2013 at 15:38

    I love when opportunity's doors swing open.

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    1. kalpana solsi12 July 2013 at 22:31

      Lolly,everybody loves when fortunes increase. thank you for reading

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  2. Reshma12 July 2013 at 17:31

    Loved the positivity in the first Haiku Kalpana :) unfortunately the second and third Haiku are a sad reflection of the current times.

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    1. kalpana solsi12 July 2013 at 22:34

      the second and the third ones are a sad reflection but the harsh truth. but the first one uplifts our mood , isn't it Reshma.

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  3. Ramesh Sood12 July 2013 at 22:57

    I found all these pretty reflective.. well done..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/ah-swinging-childhoodhaiku.html

    RS

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  4. Kodjo Deynoo13 July 2013 at 00:02

    Opportunity knocks I like that and the look of the doors

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  5. Nanka13 July 2013 at 00:19

    How soon time flies as you watch one swing to and fro!! They have become adults now!!

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    1. kalpana solsi13 July 2013 at 02:38

      time flies very fast. I still feel that I have had not enough of swinging in my childhood.




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  6. Siggi in Downeast Maine13 July 2013 at 12:01

    I love opportunity popping up but enjoyed all 3 takes.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  7. Maggie Grace13 July 2013 at 12:28

    Nice take on "swing" and great image. If I may suggest, the haiku form is closer if you have door swings open/opportunity knocks/fortunes increase. 4-6-4 :)

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    1. kalpana solsi14 July 2013 at 23:42

      WOW! that's great.Will try to be careful next time. Thanks Maggie.

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  8. rallentanda13 July 2013 at 15:23

    I like pills pop instead of the more used phrase pops pills...novel idea!

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  9. Anonymous13 July 2013 at 23:33

    Fantastic haiku! I like the balance of energies

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  10. J Cosmo Newbery13 July 2013 at 23:56

    A well thought out collection of swings!

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  11. Anonymous14 July 2013 at 15:12

    I especially like the second one. Nicely done.

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  12. Susie Clevenger14 July 2013 at 21:40

    I can relate to all of them...great haiku collection!

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  13. Unknown15 July 2013 at 00:54

    Lovely set...and the last one was my favorite...unique take!

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  14. Panchali15 July 2013 at 12:09

    Love the first one (the most). Deep one, Kalpana. Well done!

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  15. Unknown15 July 2013 at 20:31

    Kalpana... nice take... loved the third haiku....

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