Friday, 19 July 2013

TIME : HAIKU

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    GRIND IN TUMMY
     HUNGER PANGS.
    LUNCH IS READY.

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    CLOCK STRIKES SIX
OFFICE HOURS COMPLETE
       RUSH TO HOME.



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  EARTH ORBITS
AROUND THE SUN
HAPPY NEW YEAR.


I HAVE REFRAINED FROM USING THE WORD 'TIME' BUT SUBTLY SUGGESTS THE SAME.
FOR :  HAIKU HEIGHTS # 266 : TIME






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16 comments:

  1. Unknown20 July 2013 at 02:42

    What a beautiful set of Haiku. I loved the first one.

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  2. rallentanda20 July 2013 at 03:39

    Very interesting and creative. Like the earth one!

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  3. Lolly20 July 2013 at 09:43

    Keep up the excellent work, Kalpana. I like your subtlety and the economy of words. Two traits of classic haiku. Especially the 3rd one. : )

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  4. kaykuala20 July 2013 at 10:47

    Wonderful set of haiku, Kalpana! The first for me as it's everybody's problem!

    Hank

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  5. Reading Pleasure20 July 2013 at 11:25

    wonderful set. I love the first one since I don't play with my eating schedules.

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  6. Privy Trifles20 July 2013 at 12:04

    Am loving your haiku Kalpana - all of them!!

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  7. Panchali21 July 2013 at 00:50

    Beautiful...nothing can beat the last one, Kalpana. Lovely set!

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  8. Anonymous21 July 2013 at 02:35

    Fabulous haiku I can relate to the first one I have an internal alarm for meal times lol

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  9. Ramesh Sood21 July 2013 at 03:37

    Very eloquent haiku, Kalpana.. I could see the office team picking up their bags..and moving out...

    Well done..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/past-glows-in-now.html

    RS

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  10. Amrit Sinha21 July 2013 at 09:10

    A true representation of time :-)

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  11. Susie Clevenger21 July 2013 at 16:31

    You have captured time's essence so well in your haiku

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  12. Reshma22 July 2013 at 15:41

    After a while, the body clock surprisingly notifies you very accurately, you even wake up and go to sleep almost on the dot...You have subtly brought out the essence of time, nice set Kalpana:)

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  13. Anonymous23 July 2013 at 08:04

    Lovely set of sweet haiku x

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  14. Unknown25 July 2013 at 21:35

    Kalpana, I loved the second one. I so long for the time to click when I can leave from work.And the last one was amazing. loved it :)

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