Wednesday, 3 July 2013

TWO STRANGERS.

Emotions mangled.

 Mind entangled.

 Goals distant.

 Destination different.
                                                     Expensive mural.

                                                       Joy ephemeral.

                                                        Feelings truncated.

                                                        Love fabricated.
                                                                                                    Two strangers,

                                                                                                      together but apart,

                                                                                                      In one home,

                                                                                                      nay, one house.

                                                  




                                          FOR :  ULTIMATE BLOG CHALLENGE - DAY 3

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20 comments:

  1. Apala Sengupta3 July 2013 at 02:53

    such strong imagery you created with your words! lovely! :)

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    1. kalpana solsi3 July 2013 at 03:10

      Thank you Apala S. But the mood is sad but true.

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  2. Kajal Kapur3 July 2013 at 05:41

    Aww, sad :(

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  3. Bhavya N3 July 2013 at 05:42

    A home is no longer a home if the emotions and relations are not nurtured with love and care. Sad.
    Though you chose to write in a very few words, your poem speaks a lot.
    Take care.

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    1. kalpana solsi3 July 2013 at 06:02

      Thanks for the nice compliment, Bhavya.This is the sad state of modern marriages.

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  4. Privy Trifles3 July 2013 at 09:10

    Beautifully written Kalpana and I loved the new look of your blog... too colourful and peppy!!

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  5. Me3 July 2013 at 10:11

    Kalpana dearest..you waited to start this challenge..and wowow!!!Though painful..I loved the way you wrote it.. So powerful that my first reaction was a small prayer for peace and love back again in lives of those who have this as story of their life..

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    1. kalpana solsi3 July 2013 at 10:26

      Those who have this life, I pray , should set their house in order to make it a home.Thanks dear.

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  6. SuKupedia ™ :) :)3 July 2013 at 11:33

    it is painful no doubt.. but really love the way you spinned it with your words.. people who have such homes really need prayers

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    1. kalpana solsi3 July 2013 at 11:41

      Agree with you SuKu. they do need prayers.

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  7. Pixie3 July 2013 at 22:00

    :(
    So well said.. a home is never a home unless its filled with love and laughter!
    You have expressed it beautifully!

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    1. kalpana solsi3 July 2013 at 22:28

      that's right Pixie, a home should be filled with laughter, love and fun.Thanks for reading.

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  8. Corinne Rodrigues3 July 2013 at 23:49

    Powerful words to describe the sad reality of many homes, Kalpana.

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    1. kalpana solsi3 July 2013 at 23:52

      Sad state of affairs, agree with you Corinne.

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  9. Gayu4 July 2013 at 03:29

    Expectations have increased, and feelings have almost become zero.....
    This calls for a detailed post....:)

    I loved the para....its so true, a house becomes a home coz of lovem respect and feelings:)

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    1. kalpana solsi4 July 2013 at 06:31

      Very true about a home filled with love,laughter and respect.

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  10. Shilpa Garg6 July 2013 at 03:02

    Hard hitting! A grim reality for so many! :|

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    1. kalpana solsi6 July 2013 at 05:19

      Hope this doesn't turn into an epidemic.Thanks for reading Shilpa.

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