Tuesday, 6 August 2013

HAIKU : URBAN


        skyscrapers
crisscross highways
  urban jungle lives.
   urban jungle lives
     no greenery
  concrete emotions.

 concrete emotions
    man eats man
urban jungle thrives.

 This is the first time I am trying my hand at  cascading Haiku.

FOR : HAIKU HEIGHTS
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19 comments:

  1. Susie Clevenger6 August 2013 at 12:53

    So much said in these haiku...the last one is extremely powerful

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  2. Anonymous6 August 2013 at 13:01

    i like the continuation from last line of previous haiku..its nice

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    1. kalpana solsi7 August 2013 at 01:55

      This is my first cascading haiku. Thanks for reading it nandinispeak.

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  3. Vaishali Jain6 August 2013 at 13:20

    Aargh... that would be a disgusting place to live, no?

    The picture and the haiku go well together but, really - reality is a bit disturbing.

    And, hey, this doesn't seem to be your first attempt at a cascading haiku. :D Yay for you, Kalpana.

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  4. Reshma6 August 2013 at 16:51

    Brilliant cascade Kalpana... Concrete emotions are what help you survive the urban jungle.

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  5. Siggi in Downeast Maine6 August 2013 at 17:33

    I like your cascading haiku.
    It flows nicely.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  6. Saurabh Chawla7 August 2013 at 02:01

    urban jungle thrives, wonderful Kalpana. Each and every line is powerful!

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  7. Reading Pleasure7 August 2013 at 09:54

    A powerful cascade

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  8. Anonymous7 August 2013 at 10:02

    You have truly captured the essence of today's reality......loved it very much

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  9. Unknown7 August 2013 at 21:00

    Very well said...I like how you have created a new haiku with every third line...nicely done.

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  10. Pixie8 August 2013 at 07:32

    wow! Nicely done Kalpana!!

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  11. Nanka8 August 2013 at 08:46

    Brilliant!!..... absolutely the survival of the fittest!!

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  12. Nanka8 August 2013 at 08:49

    Brilliant!! ....absolutely the survival of the fittest!!

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  13. Unknown8 August 2013 at 08:53

    Love it..beautiful cascading!!

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  14. Sumana Roy8 August 2013 at 09:39


    love the shayari style. And I agree with the others ............. a powerful cascade.

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  15. Locomente8 August 2013 at 10:59

    Concrete emotions...
    How true!!!

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  16. Susie Clevenger8 August 2013 at 14:31

    I just wanted to share with you that I posted your haiku on twitter and it was then picked up and put in a daily paper called The Poetry and Me Daily Part 3 Here is the link http://paper.li/GoodPoetryBlog/1341585137?edition_id=a7249fc0-ff09-11e2-b45b-00259071bfec

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  17. eyeography8 August 2013 at 23:47

    extremely powerful haiku..
    urban jungle lives and thrives because of "urban us"...
    loved reading :)

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