Sunday, 29 September 2013

crooked

     Innocent face
 Crooked intentions
A wolf in saffron garb.



     Under the scalpel
  to fix crooked nose
bolster her filmi career.

Crooked line
rising on graph
dwindling fortunes

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24 comments:

  1. Ramesh Sood29 September 2013 at 11:55

    Great Haiku on culmination of the month....well done Kalpana.. and thanks for your constant presence on my blog too.....God bless!!!

    RS

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    1. kalpana solsi30 September 2013 at 03:29

      Thanks for the blessing Rs-ji. Nice way to start the week.

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  2. Anonymous29 September 2013 at 12:29

    I like the last one - it all depends on the axes...

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  3. Locomente29 September 2013 at 21:01

    Your second haiku was my first thought on seeing the pormpt..
    But I didnt know how to transform it into a haiku..
    You did it well!

    And I loved all of them!!! :)

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  4. Afshan Shaik29 September 2013 at 22:21

    Thats such a realisitc haiku career behind the glitz and glamour of a celeb !
    Thanks for visiting my blog with out fail !
    I respect u for that .. I will take time and read ur blog but pls excuse me if it gets delayed :)

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  5. Unknown29 September 2013 at 23:10

    Beautiful. Thank you for a month of good poems.

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  6. Unknown29 September 2013 at 23:16

    Awesome threesome.The third one is very realistic!

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  7. Corinne Rodrigues30 September 2013 at 00:36

    Wow! Nice ones all of them, Kalpana. I like the diversity of subjects you've chosen.

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  8. Unknown30 September 2013 at 01:27

    really fantastic

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  9. Panchali30 September 2013 at 03:02

    Nice set, Kalpana...the first one is super-duper !! Let's send it to Asharam Papu's AShram! LOL...

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  10. rallentanda30 September 2013 at 05:28

    Liked all. Great variety!

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  11. Shilpa Garg30 September 2013 at 06:04

    Loved all your 3 different takes on the prompt! Good ones!

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  12. Magical Mystical Teacher30 September 2013 at 06:05

    I know all about dwindling fortunes...

    Crooked Ways

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  13. Reading Pleasure30 September 2013 at 07:08

    Nice set, Kapana. A beautiful ending to a fantastic month.

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  14. Anonymous30 September 2013 at 08:50

    Three great Haiku. My favourite was the first one and especially that last line, 'a wolf in saffron garb' - great image.

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  15. Sumana Roy30 September 2013 at 08:51

    great set.........the second one made me smile.........

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  16. Maude Lynn30 September 2013 at 11:07

    I really like that first one!

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  17. KParthasarathi1 October 2013 at 03:09

    I liked all.You have a nice way of penning your lines

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  18. Anonymous2 October 2013 at 10:18

    Wonderful haiku. Such diverse thoughts for a single topic - quite cool :) I can see that you have fallen in love with Haiku :)

    -Vaisakh

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  19. Kajal Kapur3 October 2013 at 07:26

    Those are some diverse subjects you chose. And all are great as always...Crooked :)

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  20. Unknown3 October 2013 at 08:50

    Loved all, great representation of crooked in all of them ♥

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  21. Vidya Sury4 October 2013 at 20:34

    Couldn't help thinking of Sridevi with the second one! :D

    Lovely haikus, Kalpana!

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    1. kalpana solsi4 October 2013 at 22:14

      Vidyaji all the heroines (heroes ???) fall under this category. Sridevi Rekha , Prinkya etc.

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