This weekend we're asking for 30 of your own words plus the three following words for a total of 33 words.
Tether Loft Crown
Sprinting for fitness, her body was crushed badly between
the wall and the
heavy vehicle and her life was tether-ing on the brink, her loft-ty dreams of
the beauty pageant crown faded away.
for : Trifecta Writing Challenge
A story in 30 words! now thats something I can never do :)
ReplyDeleteGood one kalpana
Afshan , When I started to blog , I used to read others works and learn and was astonished to see some works written in 100 , 55 and 33 words. I started with 100 words and have now graduated to 33 words. Thanks for the appreciation.
Deletepoor girl
ReplyDeleteYes Ruby I too felt bad for her and her incomplete dreams.
DeleteIt's always sad when dreams are cut short.
ReplyDeleteYes very sad when budding dreams are nipped in the bud but its a sad fact .
DeleteWhen I saw "loft", I couldn't get "lofty" out of my head. I like how you pulled it off here!
ReplyDeleteThank you JannaTWrites. In this short story of mine the word 'loft' could be used effectively , so I had to tweak it a bit.
DeleteAh! That's sad but wonderfully captured in 30 words! Good one :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa.
DeleteWhat a brilliant attempt Kalpana. I tink I can never attempt a story in 30 words. Kudos, girl!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed for 30 words!!
ReplyDeleteSad and poignant
ReplyDeleteWhat a tragic end to a young life and beautiful dreams!Well done Kalpana:-)
ReplyDeleteTragic !!
ReplyDeleteWow--a sad story!
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking up! Be sure to come back and vote!
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written...:)
ReplyDeleteOh wow! This is amazing. I mean the idea.
ReplyDeleteThat's so tragic. Well captured in 30 words.
ReplyDeleteThat is one tough challenge :) well written :)
ReplyDeleteoh! how sad... tragic that her dreams were crushed so terribly!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed in just 30 words Kalpana!