Sunday, 20 October 2013

Grey :Haiku.

my school uniform
    grey in colour
grey cells acquired.

 grey cells acquired
from life's school
experiences for life.

 experiences of life                                
bitter and sweet
   grey crown.



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20 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 October 2013 at 08:47

    I enjoyed the narrative quality of this haiku cascade. I like the way you used alternate meanings for "grey" prompt. Good thoughtful work.

    Try mine?
    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2013/10/20/only-a-grey-smudge/

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  2. Brian Miller20 October 2013 at 09:23

    the grey crown symbol of the bitter and sweet...very nice...and an interesting progression through the greys....

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  3. Sumana Roy20 October 2013 at 09:47

    like the different shades of grey...beautiful cascade...... :)

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  4. ekta khetan20 October 2013 at 10:08

    Nice one...well written.

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  5. Kerry O'Connor20 October 2013 at 10:48

    I like the way each haiku links to the next.

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  6. Sherry Blue Sky20 October 2013 at 11:24

    Our gray crowns are our badges of honor. I love the cascading lines......

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  7. TALON20 October 2013 at 11:25

    This gives a whole other meaning to grey. Thoughtful and beautiful. Like Kerry, I love the linking.

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  8. brudberg20 October 2013 at 11:47

    a great cascade of haiku... well done

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  9. Privy Trifles21 October 2013 at 00:28

    Nice haiku...

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  10. Unknown21 October 2013 at 01:45

    Wonderful shades of grey depicted marvelously.

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  11. Anonymous21 October 2013 at 04:31

    Loved you Haiku. Specially third one. :) My haiku on 'grey' was inspired from your post 'I knew it was my last day there' :) I think I should say thank you to you then, Thank you. :) :)

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  12. Reading Pleasure21 October 2013 at 06:37

    Great cascade!

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  13. gautami tripathy21 October 2013 at 08:07

    Such a pleasure to read this!

    balance it out

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  14. Anonymous21 October 2013 at 08:16

    Lovely. All three of them. :)

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  15. KParthasarathi21 October 2013 at 08:36

    the last one brought smile

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  16. Shilpa Garg21 October 2013 at 09:15

    Nice, loved the way you have done this one! :)

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  17. Stormcat Poetry21 October 2013 at 10:39

    Thank you for visiting my blog and commenting.
    My thought as I read your Haiku trilogy, since you started with youth and developed to maturity, was that eventually the grey crown gets whiter and whiter as we go toward wisdom.

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  18. Locomente22 October 2013 at 05:04

    Thats a lovely set...

    Please follow the link to read mine...
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/10/rainbows-adorned.html

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  19. Anita Sabat22 October 2013 at 05:59

    How true! You have nailed it! :)

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  20. Reshma22 October 2013 at 08:37

    Lovely Cascade Kalpana, from grey matter inside to grey crown that is one "grey"t journey...

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