tilling the parched land
farmer is drenched in
rivulet of sweat
rivulet of blood
flowed during freedom struggle
tri-colour flag flutters
for : haiku heights
farmer is drenched in
rivulet of sweat
rivulet of blood
flowed during freedom struggle
tri-colour flag flutters
for : haiku heights
Wow Kalpana.. Beautiful.. loved both of them :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and deep!
ReplyDeletefarmer tilling land
ReplyDeletemay his rivulet of sweat
bring forth a bounty
Brilliant. Loved the second one.
ReplyDeleteThe unseen rivulets that deserve praise they never sought...Nicely done Kalpana!!
ReplyDeleteI loved both...
ReplyDeleteSo nice!!!
Please follow the link to read mine:
http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html
Both are lovely but I am more deeply touched by the second. What a story told.
ReplyDeleteVery pervasive and intense!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Alice. Both were lovely, but the second held me in a gasp!
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