Sunday 8 December 2013

Rivulet

tilling the parched land
farmer is drenched in
rivulet of sweat

 rivulet of blood
flowed during freedom struggle
tri-colour flag flutters
                for : haiku heights

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9 comments:

  1. Jyotsna Bhatia8 December 2013 at 08:37

    Wow Kalpana.. Beautiful.. loved both of them :)

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  2. Reading Pleasure9 December 2013 at 05:21

    Beautiful and deep!

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  3. Anonymous10 December 2013 at 01:56

    farmer tilling land
    may his rivulet of sweat
    bring forth a bounty

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  4. Unknown10 December 2013 at 09:40

    Brilliant. Loved the second one.

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  5. Reshma10 December 2013 at 16:41

    The unseen rivulets that deserve praise they never sought...Nicely done Kalpana!!

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  6. Locomente10 December 2013 at 23:44

    I loved both...
    So nice!!!

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html

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  7. Anonymous11 December 2013 at 11:49

    Both are lovely but I am more deeply touched by the second. What a story told.

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  8. Unknown13 December 2013 at 22:05

    Very pervasive and intense!

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  9. SaFire14 December 2013 at 21:07

    I agree with Alice. Both were lovely, but the second held me in a gasp!

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