Sunday, 8 December 2013

Rivulet

tilling the parched land
farmer is drenched in
rivulet of sweat

rivulet of blood
flowed during freedom struggle
tri-colour flag flutters


                for : haiku heights

9 comments:

  1. Wow Kalpana.. Beautiful.. loved both of them :)

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  2. farmer tilling land
    may his rivulet of sweat
    bring forth a bounty

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  3. Brilliant. Loved the second one.

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  4. The unseen rivulets that deserve praise they never sought...Nicely done Kalpana!!

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  5. I loved both...
    So nice!!!

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html

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  6. Both are lovely but I am more deeply touched by the second. What a story told.

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  7. I agree with Alice. Both were lovely, but the second held me in a gasp!

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