Sunday, 12 May 2019

ups and downs

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Straight lines, I drew,
mountains you brew,
peaks you considered.
distances apart , I Interpreted.

 I tried to stretch the barrier,
But you got angrier.
You held on to your creation,
while I fumbled with caution.

 I languished,
waiting for a slice of you.
I dusted myself, drew the border
of sanity and retreated.


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13 comments:

  1. kalpana solsi12 May 2019 at 03:36

    https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2019/05/ups-and-downs.html

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  2. Marian12 May 2019 at 07:26

    I recognize this relationship. Maybe good to have some distance.

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    1. kalpana solsi12 May 2019 at 11:15

      Some distance is necessary and thank you for the wonderful prompt Marian.

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  3. brudberg12 May 2019 at 08:04

    I think there are every reason to be careful...

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    1. kalpana solsi12 May 2019 at 11:15

      caution is always necessary. Thanks Brudberg.

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  4. Magaly Guerrero12 May 2019 at 12:57

    This speaker is so much more patient that most of us. In all relationships, both people must compromise... But when one refuses to give in even a little, nothing comes of it. Regardless of how much one waits--until skin and desires collect dust--people who won't bend with us, in order to fit each other, always end up alone.

    It's good that the speaker walks away, a bit worse for wear... but the options will come.

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  5. Jim12 May 2019 at 13:51

    I am reading the creation story of God and the Devil. Of course God wins, he always does. I liked the rhyme in the stanza one and two and tried to see if there was something in three. You definitely is an "A" rhyme with drew and brew.
    Thank you for peeking in on me.
    ..

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  6. tonispencer12 May 2019 at 15:21

    Walk away, nay, run away. This relationship is doomed

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  7. purplepeninportland.com12 May 2019 at 17:57

    I love that last stanza. You do what you need to do to stay sane.

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  8. magiceye13 May 2019 at 04:37

    Good one!

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  9. Margaret13 May 2019 at 20:45

    so many don't ever retreat... sounds like you are wise.

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  10. Mr. Walker14 May 2019 at 06:00

    I like "mountains you brew' - such a great image. Sometimes you just have to draw that line.

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  11. eric20 September 2019 at 19:15

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    i am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
    or
    call/whatsapp:+2349057261346

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