Saturday, 13 July 2013

RAINS



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SALINE STREAMS
DELUGE
CAMOUFLAGE TEARS


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  1. Tarang Sinha14 July 2013 at 01:29

    Nice one Kalpana! Our thoughts seem to match on this theme...:)

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    1. kalpana solsi14 July 2013 at 01:34

      Tarang, this is a true incident from school days. I had scored very less marks in Geography and when we were going home, I started to sob, afraid of my father's scoldings. My friends did not realize my sorry state and I was thankful for the rains.

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  2. kaykuala14 July 2013 at 17:11

    A drizzle could be helpful, though the same couldn't be said of a downpour! Nicely Kalpana!

    Hank

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  3. Tall Girl in Japan 14 July 2013 at 22:52

    Nice attempt Kalpana.I love the imagery. How about trying it in the 5-7-5 format s well !

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    1. kalpana solsi15 July 2013 at 07:27

      should try to fit into the format of a proper Haiku. Thanks Ruchira.

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  4. Privy Trifles15 July 2013 at 03:20

    Wow... this was good Kalpana!!

    Loving the way you are experimenting with your writing

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    1. kalpana solsi15 July 2013 at 07:29

      Thanks Privy. Taking baby steps in writing.

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  5. Shilpa Garg15 July 2013 at 04:01

    Ah! That's a poignant one! Loved it! :)

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    1. kalpana solsi15 July 2013 at 07:30

      Thank you Shilpa. It's a sad one. not everybody associated happiness and joy with rains.

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