Friday, 5 July 2013

sand.




Angry Waves erase                                                        
footprints on sand
  Soul-less body.


                                                                                                                  
                                                         

                                                           
                               .
                                                                                         

     Sand trickles                                                              
    from closed fist
Memories slip away.




                                                                                    

      Sand castle
        waves lash
dreams washed away.



                                                                                         
                                                                                     
    hourglass                              
   sand slides
Lost childhood







                                FOR : HAIKU HEIGHTS # 262 - SAND

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23 comments:

  1. Panchali5 July 2013 at 13:06

    aah, realities of life! Lovely!

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    1. kalpana solsi5 July 2013 at 19:14

      The harsh realities of life, Panchali. Thank you.

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  2. rallentanda5 July 2013 at 16:26

    I enjoyed all of these.

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  3. Reading Pleasure5 July 2013 at 17:42

    Beautiful and profound

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  4. Aishwarya Magesh5 July 2013 at 22:26

    Nice one............... Very true life

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  5. Anonymous6 July 2013 at 00:59

    these are all wonderful =)

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  6. Nanka6 July 2013 at 02:51

    Nice collection...and how soon time passes by!!

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  7. Unknown7 July 2013 at 07:43

    Amazing Haiku. A very good take on the topic.

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  8. Anonymous7 July 2013 at 09:15

    These are all beautifully expressed.

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  9. Locomente7 July 2013 at 23:37

    Which one I liked the most... I dunno...
    Bt 3rd one is so similar to mine...
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/07/dreams-washed-out.html

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    1. kalpana solsi7 July 2013 at 23:50

      My Haiku on sand is at No 2 after lovelything.I couldn't find the link to read your post.

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  10. Anonymous8 July 2013 at 11:40

    Ooh these are very thoughtful and fascinating. I loved the first two especially x

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    1. kalpana solsi8 July 2013 at 11:42

      Thank you winspiration.me for reading and commenting.

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  11. Gayu8 July 2013 at 21:35

    Loved these:) :) especially the hour-glass. Time lost will never come back :)

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  12. Reshma9 July 2013 at 14:37

    Beautiful set Kalpana, each one has a charm of its own...time is like grains of sand, you can never really hold it properly and before you know, its all out of your hands...

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    1. kalpana solsi9 July 2013 at 21:01

      Like the slipping sand, the time passes away and only memories remain to become precious.

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