Saturday 12 October 2013

clouds :Haiku





my mind soared higher
into the blue clouds
my grandma's home.




The shy Sun peeps
thru the veil of clouds
a game of hide n seek.


For : Haiku Heights

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22 comments:

  1. Ramesh Sood12 October 2013 at 21:07

    I can relate to both...lovely haiku.... in fact for me Grandma..stays there with my mother , dad and sister too..in your haiku I met them all....and my eyes turn into clouds.. thanks Kalpana..

    RS

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  2. KParthasarathi13 October 2013 at 01:15

    You seem a haiku specialist.They come to you with ease and very well too.

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  3. Shilpa Garg13 October 2013 at 01:34

    A heartwarming imagery is created by both these haikus. :) Loved them :)

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  4. Unknown13 October 2013 at 02:04

    Kalpana,this is such a sweet Haiku.

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  6. Unknown13 October 2013 at 05:17

    I love the imagery this haiku evokes! My parents and grandparents are all in the clouds too.

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  7. Anonymous13 October 2013 at 05:19

    My dadi's home is in the clouds too. Beautiful Haiku; both of them. But second one would be my favourite. :) :)

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  8. Sanjana 13 October 2013 at 07:17

    Yes, Grandma in the clouds and clouds playing hide n seek is something we all can connect to. Thanks!

    Pls visit: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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  9. sugandha13 October 2013 at 08:09

    Wow Kalpana. beautiful

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  10. Unknown13 October 2013 at 09:36

    lovely imaginative
    liked it

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  11. Anonymous13 October 2013 at 22:00

    specially love the first one :-)

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  12. Anita Sabat14 October 2013 at 04:50

    Even I see the clouds and imagine...Great memories...

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  13. Anonymous14 October 2013 at 10:52

    These are lovely.

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  14. Anonymous14 October 2013 at 10:53

    Lovely.

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  15. Anonymous14 October 2013 at 10:53

    Lovely.

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  16. Locomente15 October 2013 at 04:32

    Loved both...

    Here goes my try on the prompt..
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/10/i-walk.html

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  17. Panchali15 October 2013 at 06:34

    Beautiful....

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  18. Richa Singh15 October 2013 at 08:43

    Its the imagery haiku create which makes one's imagination run into things. With your words, I too went to my grandmother's home...

    Richa

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  19. preethi15 October 2013 at 11:57

    Beautiful haiku kalpana. ..love grandma's home....

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  20. Pixie15 October 2013 at 20:27

    Beautiful Haikus!
    Loved the second one more! Because the sun played hide-n-seek here today!! :D

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  21. Gillena Cox18 October 2013 at 04:24

    nice ones

    much love...

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  22. Unknown18 October 2013 at 11:41

    Loved both. But of course loved the first one more.
    Here is my take on the prompt - http://geetaavij.wordpress.com/2013/10/18/water-droplets-in-the-air-3/

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