I could feel it bulging slightly against the fabric of my trousers. The outline of the circular neat curve, fuelled my hopes. I arched my body forward and tried digging deeper. I could feel the touch of the cold body and I tried to grab it but it kept slipping away from my butter fingers. I had my eyes on the figures , time was running out and the score would increase the next second.
Her closeness irked me. The strong smell of the jasmine oil from her hair pervaded my nostrils. She was looking into my eyes , questioningly and irritatingly . Angrily , she said , 'Saheb , jaldi karo. Aur bhi customer hai' (Be quick, Sir.There are many customers waiting).
I , too, was losing my patience. A small groan escaped from my throat . At last , I made a valiant effort with all my might. My fingers dug deeper with great difficulty and clutched it tightly and fished it out.I held it in front of her eyes. It was gleaming and so was I. At last I had accomplished the task. There was a satisfied look on her face.I handed it to the lady rickshaw driver. It was a two rupee coin from my trouser pocket and the figure on the fare-meter read Rs.32/-
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Her closeness irked me. The strong smell of the jasmine oil from her hair pervaded my nostrils. She was looking into my eyes , questioningly and irritatingly . Angrily , she said , 'Saheb , jaldi karo. Aur bhi customer hai' (Be quick, Sir.There are many customers waiting).
I , too, was losing my patience. A small groan escaped from my throat . At last , I made a valiant effort with all my might. My fingers dug deeper with great difficulty and clutched it tightly and fished it out.I held it in front of her eyes. It was gleaming and so was I. At last I had accomplished the task. There was a satisfied look on her face.I handed it to the lady rickshaw driver. It was a two rupee coin from my trouser pocket and the figure on the fare-meter read Rs.32/-
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Hahaha.That was a good turn in the story!!
ReplyDeleteNaughty, naughty....nice post
ReplyDeleteHehehe, this was funny :)
ReplyDeleteYou got me, I thought something else is happening. Good job fooling me! :D
ReplyDeleteA taut storyline well narrated, Kalpana:)
ReplyDeleteYeh tho too much ho gaya. :)
ReplyDeleteOh my! That is NOT what I thought you were talking about at all!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOL Now I think I will pick my jaw up off the floor. Lovely little twist you implemented there. Now my face is red and hot. Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteLOL :D Nice twist! :D
ReplyDeleteLOL....cant stop laughing.
ReplyDeleteFishing out coins from the pocket or purse is always tough with the auto-drivers/bus-conductors gazing intently! :)
ReplyDeleteI was wondering what made you write this on a blog....I thought something else ( and I am relieved to find many others did, before me :D :D :D ) haha :) Excellent :D
ReplyDeletelol :D
ReplyDeleteAs much as others may laugh, I do think its a real story for me :P
ReplyDeleteRicha
Good one Kalpana :)The "score" bit made me think a little bit out of the box. Thought it was one of the tokens for a gaming machine. Good one :)
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