Saturday, 9 November 2013

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Haiku Heights #308 - Seven

                    


                           





                               i lost my way 
                                 in the dark
                                 saptarishi

                                 saptirishi
                              looking down 
                           to guide my way.

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                         wise sage at peace
                              conquered 
                          seven deadly sins.

(the seven deadly sins are gluttony , sloth , lust , envy , wrath , greed and pride.)

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9 comments:

  1. Unknown10 November 2013 at 03:49

    Kalpana this is very imaginative.....saptarishi showing way.

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  2. Sumana Roy10 November 2013 at 08:32

    this is stellar Kalpana.......very well crafted lines

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  3. Anonymous11 November 2013 at 09:55

    I really appreciate the review of the seven deadly sins in haiku. Nicely done.

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  4. Reshma11 November 2013 at 18:07

    May the stars guide us in our quest, nicely done Kalpana

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  5. Rajlakshmi12 November 2013 at 01:00

    brilliant write... I loved the connection between the two

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  6. Ramesh Sood12 November 2013 at 01:17

    I liked the Saptrishi showing the way...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/11/seven-seas-haiku.html

    RS

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  7. Unknown12 November 2013 at 18:31

    Lovely haiku with the stars guiding the way brilliantly through each line.

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  8. rallentanda13 November 2013 at 03:27

    Very clever and creative use of the prompt.

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  9. preethi13 November 2013 at 04:25

    Interesting. ...loved it :)

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