of joy or sad
tears of mother Nature
dew drops on grass.
dew drops on grass
sun-rays strike
glistening solitaires.
glistening solitaires
lovers walk bare-foot
he breaks blade of grass
he breaks blade of grass
goes on his knees
will you???
for : haiku heights
Awesome poem! You are very imaginative.
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Very interesting cascade... like it Kalpana..Thanks for your visit.. do visit again to see a new add..
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This is so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteVery sweet!
ReplyDeleteWow...brilliant!!:o
ReplyDeleteCreatively Done, Kalpana! :)
ReplyDeleteHow lovely!
ReplyDeleteLovely collection Kalpana..
ReplyDeletebeautiful....and the last one made me smile..lovely
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Refreshing set!:)
ReplyDeleteTears of nature, glistening solitaires, very refreshing way to describe the dew Kalpana. Lovely cascade in which each verse stands brilliantly on its own..
ReplyDelete"tears of Mother Nature" - that line said it all.
ReplyDeleteLoved them sll..esp. the solitaire. .:)
ReplyDeleteLoved the cascade, I so enjoyed the feel of glistening solitaires in my head.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful cascade, hope there was a yes!
ReplyDeleteSuperbly penned ! Nice one, there, Kalpana ji :)
ReplyDeleteI like the "tears" image. I would have liked this proposal. It's so romantic.
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