Friday, 13 December 2013

dreams



With head held high, I want to tread
wish to spread my wings, without dread

I wish to conquer, the waves, gleam
My wide open eyes dream

Dream of ambitions
In bright light renditions.

I want not to grope
Nor wanderer be, in dark hope.

Steering towards my dream destination
in driver’s seat, a celebration.

                                                        
                                               
                                       


P.S. : I have condensed my poem to 55 words but this has not prevented me from my dreaming , dreams of gigantic proportions. What are your dreams , your ambitions and aspirations?
                         FOR : WRITE TRIBE FESTIVAL OF WORDS II DAY 7
A beautiful poem by Sunita. Read here............................


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15 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 December 2013 at 11:16

    May your dreams come true :). Lovely verse on Dreams.

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  2. Sunita13 December 2013 at 11:23

    You have said everything in those 55 words Kalpana. :)

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  3. Unknown13 December 2013 at 12:40

    I'm hoping to avoid the dark hope and stay in the driver's seat too!

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  4. Suzy13 December 2013 at 21:50

    Nice poem. But I hope that hope isn't dark. Wish you dreams come true.

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  5. maithili13 December 2013 at 22:06

    I agree with Sunita. You have beautifully conveyed everything in 55 words :)

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  6. Privy Trifles13 December 2013 at 22:15

    Amen <3

    Beautifully written as always!

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  7. Aditi13 December 2013 at 23:07

    Keep dreaming!! Lovely lines...such great way to end this WT journey!! :)

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  8. Richa Singh14 December 2013 at 02:03

    55 words of meaning. And in the end your explanation as to how you condensed the thoughts into 55 even better..

    Richa

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  9. Nischala14 December 2013 at 02:15

    Well penned.. Dream and live your dreams

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  10. Ruchira Khanna14 December 2013 at 10:05

    beautiful dream kalpana!
    Amen!

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  11. Tarang Sinha14 December 2013 at 18:36

    Really nice poem Kalpana!...and uplifting...:)

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  12. payal agarwal15 December 2013 at 01:55

    Beautifully crafted..:)

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  13. Anita Sabat15 December 2013 at 07:50

    Very nicely expressed. Truth that's short & sweet.

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  14. preethi16 December 2013 at 00:32

    Super poem..conveyed so much in 55 words :)

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  15. Anonymous16 December 2013 at 12:33

    Steering towards my dreams' destination, this phrase beautifully expresses your state of mind on dreams an fulfilling one's inspiration.

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