#TellTaleThursday
A situational prompt - You are at a fair and you get a note – “Catch me if you can!”
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My Kolhapuri chappals scurried with apprehensions. The crescendo
of heartbeats
resonated in my ears. Will I find what I am looking for? My palms
were sweating and the
crumpled note, “Catch me if you can? “, acted as an absorbent
tissue. Who stuffed the
note in my palm?
I do not remember. Maybe it was when I was alighting from the roller
coaster.
The village fair din added to my confusion. I asked the villagers for the
direction
of the banyan tree. This was the clue in the note.
I stood under the shade of the giant tree. I looked around. “Dig
here”, a paper pinned on
the bark of the tree sent my nerves racing. A small mound of earth caught my attention.
I
genuflected and pushed aside the soil with my bare hands. I held it in between
my
thumb and index finger and brought it to the level of my eyes. I stared at
it. A talisman. I
looked around. The cacophony of the fair vanished. Silence
reigned.
The buzz on my cell phone pierced into my sleeping ears. I
snoozed it. Damn. I am late
for duty. My fingers ran into my hair. I splashed
water on my face pulling the curtain
down on the hangover of a dream. Looking
up into the mirror, I saw the talisman around
my neck.
word count : 225
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ReplyDeleteOh wow.. Cleverly spun kalpana.. Liked the visual description... Worked like an absorbent tissue and the last one where she finds thr talisman hanging around her neck are quite good
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly weaved narration and heart pounding. The end is simply ecstatic Kalpana.
ReplyDeleteLoved he ending, Kalpana. that was done brilliantly.
ReplyDeleteWow, that is indeed rather chilling. A really good story. It has been a long time since I wrote fiction of any kind. It is high time I picked up the threads where I left them.
ReplyDeleteHere is one I wrote some time back.
http://jaisjottings.com/2018/07/one-too-many/
This is so well written, Kalpana. I loved your word play here.
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